Posts

Showing posts from January, 2020

Comments

1. What has this group done well?    I really like group 2 when they have the idea that closes the light, which makes me feel the actual atmosphere. For group 3, I think Amy's performance was so good like all her emotions are perfect. The first group was good at the creation of the environment. And the last group, I think they showed a very real scene. 2. What, if anything, is confusing about this scene?     The first group makes me confused because at first, I can't link their plot with their gun. For others, I don't really confused about their plot. 3. Describe the emotion of the characters/plot.      I feel like the first group is kind of relax, second is fear, the third is angry, and the last is also angry. 4. Describe the relationship between the characters.      The first group is c omrades in arms I think. Second are friends, the third is dad and daughter, the last one is also friends   5. What else coul...

Essay Pre-writing

Describe There so many masks that have different emotions on it. This picture represents that even people have so many emotions, they sometimes need to hide it shows a different one to others. Para1: Intro            Thesis Para2: analyze: The emotion about those masks                           why is it on masks? Para3: analyze: The background color.                          what's the feeling when I saw that? negative or positive? Para4: analyze: The number of those masks                          why is there such an amount of masks? everyone need it? Para5: conclusion           Percy & Mike

Link of in class writing revison

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u1hVWLdDeapkJxtW02TceB-YrHva2RZrfPennuBJjyU/edit?usp=sharing

revison

For Mike's story: 1. The end of the story, it makes me feel it ends really quickly. 2. All the details, like the stuff in the room, and the process of the girl's experiment. 3. Might be the kind of liquid, I think named those liquids were much better than call them by colors. 4. At the start, when he writes about the stuff in the room. 5. Like I said in question 3, use the colors of liquids might be a bit bored for readers. Also, her actions during the experiment, Mike could write more details on that. 6. I think Mike already use all the stuff in the picture. 1. The twist of the story is my favorite part, which really surprised me. 2. He uses action verb that we use to describe a chemistry experiment, like flip over. 3. I think he needs the start of his story, like why the girl wants to do the experiment. 4. I think is the ending, I really like it, this will surprised the reader. 5. I don't think there are some parts of the story makes me confused. 6. Mike'...

In class 2Paragraphs

1) The picture is about a man that opens his head with a group of keys, and all his body is gold and also some gold stuff floating in the air. 2)  He is the most famous artist in this world, he's work was so dramatic and creative. As a result, the story and gossip of him were also unbelievable. The most famous one was told by his previous housekeeper. She said in horror: "One day I was waking up at midnight and I want to get some water. When I pass by his studio, I saw some light were behind the door. I was not that surprised, because he always works until midnight, so I open the door and want to ask him did he need some water or some food to take a rest. By the time I open the door, I was shocked. I saw his head was opened but he's still standing there and hold some keys that I never saw before, and there are some small specks floating in the air. Those specks just come directly into his head. I was so scared, I run out of the house and scream and on the next day I just...

Action verb

I sleep a lot I ate hot pot I learned Korean I run to my home I watched Witcher I read a book when I m on the plane I listen to music every day I call my friend on the first day of 2020 I drink Coke every day I travel to Beijing A man seems to open his head to let something come into his head. He might be run out of ideas. He's become smart and creative again. Nouns: keys, man, head, ideas active verbs: come, open characters: he's a creative artist colors: yellow, red background: could be the universe, or someplace at his home five senses: cold, warm, comfortable adjective: shiny, creative specific details: the symbols on the keys are heart, sword and a skull