Final draft reflection

1. I think I did well on my final draft. Mainly because this is a good song with meaningful lyrics, so is easy to write an analysis about that.
2. It depends on the paper that other people writes opinions for me. I put more analyze for the quotation and add the topic sentence for each paragraph.
3. The difficult is to write a thesis about the lyrics. The lyrics are quite confused for the first time, but when I find out it is related on 1984 everything becomes easy.
4. My strengths are to find the materials that can help me and I really interested to write an analysis of one of my favorite songs. My weakness is I'm confused about the words I can use, my vocabulary is not enough.
5. I will put more examples from the book 1984 to connected with this song.
6. 1) Thesis is specific
Ideas are original and not just stating the obvious
Quotes are used as evidence in the body paragraph
2) Free of grammatical errors
Body paragraph have ending sentence
Interesting to read.

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