In class writing

One of the performances that I watched is about music. It's obvious to see that this group is focused on what impact of music on people. They have background music and an actor to shows that he's really enjoying this music. Another person is the narrator to use the poem to explain what's their performance. This is very simple and clear to emphasis on their theme. Also, it is close to our daily life. I really like Mike's acting because it really shows the mentioned by the writer, which is music can be used to express the internal emotion, whatever it is sad or joy.  One thing I think they can improve is to shows the different emotions, the author mentioned both the positive and negative emotions, they can create another scene to show the negative emotion because the author really mentioned a lot in the poem. Another performance I watched is for the Mom to Son. I watched this one because our group also work on this, and Tony's group was so different from ours. The only speaker in our group is the narrator, and the rest of us were just focused on the acting. Compare with them, they put a lot of attention on the conversation between mom and son. The lines of the characters in their performances will be more important. I think the advantage of focusing on the lines is to convey the most intuitive information to the audience through the language information. Some of our pantomimes require the audience to figure out something. In addition, I think this group did a good job in the expression of emotion, expressing the feelings when narrating their lines.